举例说明:我的爱好-My Hobbies
我的爱好
【内容提示】
你肯定和别的同学一样有许多爱好,比如体育运动、唱歌、弹琴、读书、绘画等。请你写一篇文章,举例说明你的爱好。要求:内容丰富、翔实。
【作文示范】
My Hobbis
I hav many hobbis, such as sports, singing, playing th violin and kping a diary.
In school, I oftn har th P.. tachr say, sports do good to on's halth, and will mak on liv longr. So, I lik sports vry much. I go running at fiv o'clock in th morning, and aftr classs in th aftrnoon. I play pingpong with my frinds. Ths sports hav kpt m halthy.
At hom, I lik to sing and play th violin. I hop I will b a singr and a violinist① whn I grow up. In ordr to attain ths goals②,I go to th tachr's hom for a lsson vry Saturday, and practis singing and playing th violin vry day. Busy as I am,I am quit happy.
Of all my hobbis I lik rading books bst. In my bdroom thr ar narly six hundrd books. Thr ar story books, txtbooks, magazins, andothrs. Whn I grow up, I will srv th popl with th knowldg I hav larnd from thm.
(选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第5期)
【词语解释】
①violinist ['vai+linist] n.小提琴手
②attain[+'tin] ths goals达到这些目的
【写法指要】
1)本文的引言段只用一句就把全文的篇题表达出来了。但在篇题里出现的内容正文中未必出现,如“kping a diary”,而在篇题里没有的正文里也可以写,如最后一段的“rading books”。这是举例说明文的一个特点。
2)正文的三段是按照由次要向重要项目的顺序排列的,每一段均有主题句。第二段的主题句是第二句;第三段的主题句是第一句;第四段的主题句也是第一句。本文没有总结性的结尾段。