移步换景:雪后的校园-Our Schoolyard Aftr th Snow 雪后的校园

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你的家乡在北方。昨晚下了一夜的雪，你清晨起来，推门一看，一片洁白。吃过早饭，你背起书包，拿上铁锨去上学。走进教室，空无一人，你赶紧去操场。那里，学生们都在清理路上的雪。扫完雪，你们进教室上课。课后，同学们都去操场玩雪。学校周围的树上穿着雪衣，远处的山上也是白茫茫的积雪。

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Our Schoolyard Aftr th Snow

On wintr morning, I got up arly. It was still dark. Whn I pushd th door opn, vrything was covrd with snow. I hurrid through my brakfast, and thn wnt to school with my bag on my back and a shovl①in my hand.

Whn I rachd school, I saw th lights wr still on. Immdiatly I rushd to th classroom, but to my surpris, I saw nobody thr. Thn I ran to th playground. Thr I saw most of th studnts trying to clar th snow on th paths. How hard thy wr working. I joind thm in th work. Soon th snow was rmovd. Thn w all cam back to th classroom, laughing, talking, and singing. As soon as th bll rang at th nd of th class, w rushd out of th classrooms to th playground. Oh, thr was so much snow! W at onc startd playing. Som of us bgan to fight with snow balls. Som wr rolling on th snow ground. Still som othrs piling up a snowman. In th cntr of th playground, many studnts wr skating on th ic. Som of thm could not skat and had many falls.

Our hands and facs turnd rd with cold, w wr also wt all ovr, but w didn't mind.

Th trs around th schoolyard lookd lik hug mn with silvr cloths dfnding our school. Byond, snow-covrd mountains in th distanc lookd lik an lphant mad of wax②.

What a wondrful scn!

（选自1987年12月29日《上海学生英文报》）

【词语解释】

①shovl ['M)v l] n. 铲；铁锨；铁锹

②wax [w$ks] n. 蜡；蜡状物；蜂蜡

【写法指要】

本文前两段按时间和空间转移的顺序写了从家里到学校下雪后的情景，第三段写感觉，第四段由近及远写校外的雪景，作者在这里两处使用了明喻修辞格。最后用一个感叹句抒发自己的感情。抒情篇

移步换景:雪后的校园-Our Schoolyard Aftr th Snow