惋惜之情:在警察局里-At the Police Station
在警察局里
【内容提示】
暑假期间,为了了解社会你参加了一次公安局对罪犯的审讯活动。被审讯的人是一名19岁的吸毒者。你旁听了公安人员和罪犯的对话后对这个年轻人很是惋惜。请你写一篇文章表达你的惋惜之情。
【作文示范】
At th Polic Station
During th summr vacation, I had a chanc to visit a polic station in ordr to larn somthing about socity. Thr I caught sight of a drug addict①.
That day, I was rading a dossir of a cas② in th offic whn a young man was brought in.
“How old ar you?”a policman askd.
“Nintn,”th man answrd in a low voic.
“How long hav you bn taking drugs?”
“For 3 yars.”
On haring this, I was vry surprisd. Now I knw how h had bcom so thin, so pal and so wak. Drugtaking③ cost him so much mony that h had to stal. As a rsult h was caught.
“Now I raliz I was wrong. I fl I hav lt my mothr down who has bn ill for a long tim and is always worrid about m. But now…I must di. I must di….”
Nintn is a goldn ag. At this ag h could hav bn at school or in th army or on a farm if h had not takn drugs.
His cas provs th truth of a Chins saying:“A momnt's rror can bring a liflong rgrt.④”
(选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年第4期)
【词语解释】
①drug addict ['dr)g +'dikt] 吸毒者
②a dossir ['d&sii]of a cas 一起案件材料
③drug-taking n.吸毒
④A momnt's rror can bring a liflong rgrt.一失足成千古恨。
【写法指要】
本文用夹叙夹议的手法写了对一个失足青年的惋惜之情。第一、二段是叙述,写时间、地点和事件;第三段是议论,写作者听到警察与吸毒青年的交谈后的感想;第四段叙述该罪犯忏悔的表白;第五段又是议论,抒发惋惜之情;第六段引用一句中国格言结束全文。