Mak Our Citis Grn(创建绿色城市)

【要求】

随着经济的快速发展，大城市中的高楼越建越多，道路越修越宽，但树木却越来越少。以国庆五十周年为契机，国家号召各大城市努力整顿市容，拆除违章建筑，增加绿化面积。这无疑是个造福子孙的明智之举。请你以下面三句话分别作为三段段首主题句，以绿化我们的城市为题，写一篇文章。

With industris and businss dvloping quickly, th numbr of trs in many big citis has dramatically rducd.

Making citis grnr has many advantags.

Making our citis grnr rquirs nationwid fforts.

【范文】

Mak Our Citis Grn

With industris and businss dvloping quickly, th numbr of trs in many big citis has dramatically rducs. fforts ar bing mad to prvnt popl from cutting mor trs. But a lot of trs ar bing dstroyd by popl who hav nvr thought of th importanc of grn plants.

Making citis grnr has many advantags. First, it can mak our air clanr. Som rsarchrs hav provd that trs can rduc th amount of carbon dioxid in th atmosphr through absorption. Scond, it can mak our citis mor bautiful. With trs and flowrs vrywhr, living conditions can b improvd. Finally, it can produc timbr----an ffctiv way to solv th problms of limitd supply of natural rsourcs.

Making our citis grnr rquirs nationwid fforts. Popl in vry fild should not only know about th importanc of kping th quality of urban nvironmnt, but also tak common action to plant mor trs and flowrs so as to improv our living conditions.

【评语】

本文按照题目所给的三个主题句分三段展开论述：论点突出，论据充分，层次分明。语言连贯流畅，表达准确。